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author | Jan Van Bruggen <jancvanbruggen@gmail.com> | 2021-11-03 18:42:32 -0600 |
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committer | GitHub <noreply@github.com> | 2021-11-03 18:42:32 -0600 |
commit | 7d56174c1e0f50a06e897f83b3c1b97ac87dbf5a (patch) | |
tree | 5e2f8b52a363ed3e56cd8a23e947ac5d35d63722 | |
parent | 1e7c796e66a692cd097b155bd0a60fedf20d554f (diff) |
Reword "we"s to "I"s for consistency
This script uses multiple forms of the first-person POV:
1. "We" to refer to the Nix team (https://github.com/NixOS/nix/blob/1e7c796e66a692cd097b155bd0a60fedf20d554f/scripts/install-multi-user.sh#L72)
2. "We" to refer to the combination of the installation script & the user/executor (https://github.com/NixOS/nix/blob/1e7c796e66a692cd097b155bd0a60fedf20d554f/scripts/install-multi-user.sh#L710)
3. "We" to refer to the installation script alone (https://github.com/NixOS/nix/blob/1e7c796e66a692cd097b155bd0a60fedf20d554f/scripts/install-multi-user.sh#L602)
4. "I" to refer to the installation script alone (https://github.com/NixOS/nix/blob/1e7c796e66a692cd097b155bd0a60fedf20d554f/scripts/install-multi-user.sh#L200)
Since I prefer POV 4 to POV 3, this changes all instances of POV 3 to POV 4.
-rw-r--r-- | scripts/install-multi-user.sh | 22 |
1 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/scripts/install-multi-user.sh b/scripts/install-multi-user.sh index 513127a62..7d1cb8c5a 100644 --- a/scripts/install-multi-user.sh +++ b/scripts/install-multi-user.sh @@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ manager. This will happen in a few stages: 1. Make sure your computer doesn't already have Nix. If it does, I will show you instructions on how to clean up your old install. -2. Show you what we are going to install and where. Then we will ask +2. Show you what I am going to install and where. Then I will ask if you are ready to continue. 3. Create the system users and groups that the Nix daemon uses to run @@ -614,14 +614,14 @@ manager. This will happen in a few stages: EOF - if ui_confirm "Would you like to see a more detailed list of what we will do?"; then + if ui_confirm "Would you like to see a more detailed list of what I will do?"; then cat <<EOF -We will: +I will: - make sure your computer doesn't already have Nix files (if it does, I will tell you how to clean them up.) - - create local users (see the list above for the users we'll make) + - create local users (see the list above for the users I'll make) - create a local group ($NIX_BUILD_GROUP_NAME) - install Nix in to $NIX_ROOT - create a configuration file in /etc/nix @@ -656,7 +656,7 @@ run in a headless fashion, like this: $ curl -L https://nixos.org/nix/install | sh -or maybe in a CI pipeline. Because of that, we're going to skip the +or maybe in a CI pipeline. Because of that, I'm going to skip the verbose output in the interest of brevity. If you would like to @@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ EOF fi cat <<EOF -This script is going to call sudo a lot. Every time we do, it'll +This script is going to call sudo a lot. Every time I do, it'll output exactly what it'll do, and why. Just like this: @@ -682,15 +682,15 @@ EOF cat <<EOF This might look scary, but everything can be undone by running just a -few commands. We used to ask you to confirm each time sudo ran, but it +few commands. I used to ask you to confirm each time sudo ran, but it was too many times. Instead, I'll just ask you this one time: EOF - if ui_confirm "Can we use sudo?"; then + if ui_confirm "Can I use sudo?"; then ok "Yay! Thanks! Let's get going!" else failure <<EOF -That is okay, but we can't install. +That is okay, but I can't install. EOF fi } @@ -811,8 +811,8 @@ main() { # pre-Catalina macOS if run as root user. if [ $EUID -eq 0 ]; then failure <<EOF -Please do not run this script with root privileges. We will call sudo -when we need to. +Please do not run this script with root privileges. I will call sudo +when I need to. EOF fi |